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Nyerguds
03-25-2004, 06:15 PM
This is kinda nonsensical... but overall, it's just a poem about longing.


Who will make

Who will
make ride?
Ride the waves and ride the tide

Who will
make see?
Gaze into infinity

Who will
make find?
Hidden names inside my mind

Who will
make hear?
Sounds that drive away the fear

Who will
make fly?
One-winged angel in the sky

Who will
make laugh?


Who will
make love?

Artificial Idiot
03-26-2004, 02:43 AM
I like it. It has the AIES seal of approval (for what that's worth :p)

Nyerguds
03-26-2004, 02:32 PM
Wewt! You know I still appreciate it, despite the uncertainty of its value :p