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Tofu
04-23-2004, 07:27 PM
When all is said and done no one will ever hear.
No one will ever be, and no one will ever see.
But isn't the journey worth talking about?
Perhaps it is, maybe in the light of the night.
Or in towers high above the sphear in which gaze down to the right.
Patterns and patterns of disorganized colours lay to waste.
Maybe by some, those of which that like to taste.
Give in to them, for no one will ever be.
Remember the right time is now, not later silly me.

Confusion and boredom will trickle in.
The state of our lives just hasn't been.
Life isn't work, its to live and have fun.
Playing in the rain and under the sun.
We were all kids once in a time that is now lost.
To remember how we were, is a definite must.
We, the children of Earth suffer a lot.
None of us are having fun, letting creativity to rot.
Philosphy and art in the most purest form.
Is what we're made from, before and after the storm.

When all is said and done no one will ever be.
Being all one can be, isn't enough for me.
Rekindle the light in our heart and soul.
Relight our lives and live in whole.
Join me now and live your life.
Unless you love to live in strife.
Oh children, this plateau that hangs over the sea.
She has been hurt by us, how can this be?
Disarming now is nothing you see.
Too little too late, say goodbye we.

Blue Aurora
04-23-2004, 08:18 PM
Very good poem Tofu. I'm impressed with your literituare skills. :)

GMP
04-23-2004, 09:37 PM
Good poem :D

MrHappyPants
04-23-2004, 10:05 PM
Sorry, I don't do poetry.

Spider786
04-24-2004, 01:30 AM
Good poem

Tofu
04-26-2004, 11:47 AM
Thanks for the compliments, and thanks to mrhappypants for reasons unknown. ;)

SirSnake
04-26-2004, 01:11 PM
you know theres a forums for this sort of thing

Tofu
04-27-2004, 11:21 AM
you know theres a forums for this sort of thing

Really? Where?

SirSnake
04-27-2004, 02:11 PM
actually i forgot the smilie, it was said half i jest! ;)


i was just thinking about the fan fiction part. it may say FF on it, but reallly they accept everything in their like this, and you will get some better critics than the spammers! :p

Tofu
04-27-2004, 09:52 PM
Thanks, I thought FF was just for stories and I haven't really check it out. But it does have poetry and other stuff in there, thanks. I'll post further odd poetry of mine in there.

Wrecking Crew
04-27-2004, 11:06 PM
Moved to a more appropiate forum :lol:

Tofu
04-28-2004, 11:12 AM
:lol: Thanks Wreck, I guess...

Artificial Idiot
04-28-2004, 11:18 AM
Fan Fiction covers stories, art, poetry and random doodling. Fan Fiction isn't really a good name for it though, as it implies that the stories have to be cnc related.

Nyerguds
05-04-2004, 03:05 AM
Let's rename it to Artsy Fartsy!


j/k :scared:

Tofu
05-04-2004, 11:19 AM
Nah, lets rename it to "Abstract thoughts and Patterns Within" oh wait a minute...