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Toxic10x
04-23-2004, 07:36 PM
Others live their lives together



Relationships:

joy, despair,

love, bitterness,

passion, hate



They Live




I cannot.



I feel love,

But it is not returned

I feel joy,

But it is not shared

I cry,

But I am not heard



Alone,

I cannot live

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just something I thought up when I was feelin lonely :( I still don't like the first line... not sure it's really necessary, but I try not to be too damn vague.

oh sorry for anyone not on modden1 for this appearing in white text, just highlight if u cant read it :p

Artificial Idiot
04-24-2004, 04:46 AM
Not quite as random as I expected :p

I'm not a great reader of poems, but it's good for what it is. A display of feeling :)

Edit: ugh, my spelling :\

Blue Aurora
04-24-2004, 05:36 AM
Good work Toxic...reminds me of what the Buddha said about suffering and the Four Noble Truths. :cool: