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n00bie51
08-12-2004, 09:09 AM
Anyone like "Her Name is Mai Chen"? I WROTE IT!
Blue Aurora
08-12-2004, 10:13 AM
Post a link, then maybe they'll put comments and criticism.
n00bie51
08-12-2004, 01:35 PM
Oh ok lol

Read my story incase you havent
Her Name is Mai Chen (http://www.cncden.com/ren_warstories/mai_chen.shtml) :D
HawkEye1102002
08-23-2004, 04:50 PM
Sadly, I read mostly the Red Alert War stories, but I liked this one though...
n00bie51
08-24-2004, 06:35 AM
Thank you.

I made a few grammar mistakes I believe.
HawkEye1102002
08-24-2004, 12:16 PM
I make gramma mistakes as well, but I also do spelling mistakes (Curses my Dyslexya) but just because of a few speling and gramma mistakes, doesn't mean that the story is bad.
n00bie51
08-24-2004, 04:09 PM
Yes, I'm quite proud of it. :D
Desolator12
08-24-2004, 04:28 PM
I had a re-written version of A Desolate Life shown to a sci-fi writer, and she liked it. I'm proud of it... all she said was that it seemed to go into a fight scene too quickly... I'm working on the prequel... starting where it began... In Einstein's Laboratory..
n00bie51
08-24-2004, 05:55 PM
Cool...

Think about becoming a writer?
Desolator12
08-24-2004, 11:31 PM
either that or work for a computer company... or a gaming company...
n00bie51
08-26-2004, 07:25 AM
Yes, that sounds cool.

Bam, instant employee-discounted copy of D00M 3!
HawkEye1102002
09-05-2004, 07:13 PM
I had a re-written version of A Desolate Life shown to a sci-fi writer, and she liked it. I'm proud of it... all she said was that it seemed to go into a fight scene too quickly... I'm working on the prequel... starting where it began... In Einstein's Laboratory..
Congrats!!!!

I hope you make loads of money out of your books, and don't forget, that even if you make mistakes, it doesnt mean that your story is bad, like my war stories (Still waiting for Lion to finish putting up the rest of the chapters)